NOTE: I am currently booking two–four months out for story consultations. For time-sensitive edits, please see my brilliant and capable associates at MS Editors. To be added to my waiting list, fill out this form for a price quote and time estimate.
Story Consultations—all genres
What it is: A Story Consultation takes your detailed synopsis and critiques it for content. This is not an edit; it is a way to find plot holes, cut unnecessary scenes, and restructure the plot or reframe the story.
The more detailed your synopsis, the better. I suggest a word count of 5% your manuscript’s total word count. Include paragraph breaks for each new scene. If you have multiple POVs, note those per scene.
Plot Hole Spotter & Story Consultation
- Total MS under 60K: $50
- Total MS 60K–80K: $70
- Total MS 80K–95K: $90
- Total MS over 95K: $120
- Add a Skype or Google chat for $60 per hour
For Story Consultations, email querylara [at] gmail [.] com with the subject line “Story Consultation.” Include your manuscript’s total word count. I will email you instructions.
NOTE: I am currently closed to full manuscript critiques. If you’d like a keen editorial eye for your entire manuscript, see my associates at MS Editors.
Full Manuscript Critique I edit and critique all genres with a few exceptions: no horror, no erotica (the genre; sensual heat is fine), no sexual violence, no depicted violence against children, no POVs in the head of misogynists or racists or sociopaths. For genres I’m especially drawn to, see my MWSL. What it is: A broad look at the entire novel as a whole, including a summary of repeated errors or areas needing improvements What you get: One page overviewing the beginning, middle, and ending of the novel One page detailing setting, character development, structure, and theme A bulleted list of common errors, mistakes, and room for improvement Does not include: A list of spelling, grammar, syntax errors An exhaustive list of specific changes Suggestions to improve writing style When to get it: After revising your complete manuscript How much might it cost? On average, $8 per thousand words (round up to the nearest 1,000)—click here to get started. Optional add-on: THE BEAT SHEET, $35
(not available without Manuscript Critique)
What it is: An outline of the novel, reducing each scene or section into one sentence
When to get it: After you complete your first draft or before you write a synopsis